IELTS General Training Writing Task 2 Essay Evaluation Band 7

Hi All, In this video, I have evaluated a writing sample for general training task 2 which I got from a student. I scored 8.5 overall in IELTS (8.5 in Reading and Speaking), and 8 in other 2). The link for my other IELTS videos is: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLzgnrjzwVlHx0HFnliq0djpdQMTZkZmEY