IELTS Writing Walkthrough HD

https://www.udemy.com/ielts-preparation-course/?couponCode=YOUTUBE Get a Band 7+ on my 2 hour IELTS Preparation Course Watch me write an IELTS Writing Task 1 report, on screen, about a bar graph. You will see and hear my thought process as I write. I talk about the bar graph, and then I plan the essay, thinking out-loud the essay structure and language I should use. Then watch and listen as I write the essay! ----- BELOW IS THE FINAL ESSAY: The bar chart compares the proportion of male and female teachers in a range of educational institutions in the UK in 2010. Overall, significant differences in employment patterns between men and women across the education sector are apparent. Women predominated in schools for children up to the age 11. This was especially true in teaching institutions for very young children. About 95% of nursery school teachers, for instance, were female. There was a similar situation in primary schools, where over 90% of teachers were women. There was more of a gender balance in teaching institutions which catered for older students and young adults. For example, college lecturers were equally divided between men and women. Male lecturers were significantly in the majority in universities, where 70% of teaching staff were male; this was more than twice the number of female lecturers. Overall, women were more likely to be found in educational settings were there were young children whereas male teachers predominated in the higher status teaching role of a university lecturer.