Defying Gravity Animatic (feat W.I.T.C.H. OCs)

(Disclaimer: W.i.t.c.h. and the song, Defying Gravity, is not mine. Except for Sephy and Artemis, they are mine.) This is a story about two siblings with different ideals (and is obviously not canon to W.I.T.C.H. or the story I am developing for these two siblings. It just so happen that they have the right personalities for this song.). This is set in the fortress of Kandrakar, where Sephy has recently rebelled against the Oracle by taking the heart of Kandrakar. Her sister, Artemis, objects to their actions and tries to convince her not to go against Kandrakar. Constructive criticism is gratefully welcome.